DCFR re write, again?

I am sincerely considering re writing that story again. I think the problem with it may be that it is in Dan's POV. Perhaps it should be third person? I don't know how I feel about switching POV's I'm afraid it will end up like Profe.
I'd like to finish this and and BF before the end of the summer but it just gets harder and harder.

Gerald at Sea

Here is a wonderful drawing that Magalina made for me back in 2007! Wow how long have I been working on BF and it's still not done!
I know updating has slowed down again, but I've gone overachiever on my own ass and decided to take more than 12 credits this semester + two jobs :| So I apologize for not updating but I hope your enjoying the "Sing" and Magalina's picture

DCFR Time Line

 I have this story's time line almost completely lined out. I figured I'd share the parts that have happened with all of you. I have to say though, since it is mostly Adam's story told from Dan's POV the flow has slowed a bit, but I'm not giving up!